Concentrating On.......... Poem by lalitha iyer

Concentrating On..........



Concentrating on
Hurt,
it hurts me...
on music
it transforms me
into a melody,
I am falling
into the rippling waves
afloat the rhythmn
the words
like bellows
I pillow upon
and I
slip through
each stanza
and soon
I am lost
into the core
it devours me
and quite awake
lost in the music
I am unaware
of the world of men
the rain
its moisture
the lazy earth
its lusty sprouts
I look into the ocean
tattoed by the drops of heaven
bangling the water surface
with circles and loops
I am lost
something is pulling me
in this tug-of-war
between Me
and the baffling Nature
which lures me
with traps innumerable
Insecure am I
my mind lost
suffering bouts of forgetting
drunken by Amnesia
intoxicated by Ambrosia.........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Arumugam 02 June 2009

lovely and intense poem about music and nature... SUGGESTION the last two lines are a bit cliched: drunken by Amnesia intoxicated by Ambrosia.........

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Joseph Poewhit 20 May 2009

Music is a catalyst of life

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