Confession Poem by gul naz

Confession

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I picked up a quill
And a parchment too
To write a letter
Aletter of confession
I thought
I needed
A dictionary too
To find the words
Best to confess
I chose the words
And arranged them too
But something was lacking
Or everything I mean
The words seemed totally askew
Empty, void and soulless too
Quill and parchment would not do
To ask forgiveness a tear is enough
But the tear should come out
From heart true

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 03 February 2010

Very true, rekhtia, kha poem de. language and style.10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 December 2009

To ask forgiveness a tear is enough But the tear should come out ..............................................Adab Gul From heart true.real confession from heartis enough for removal of guilt from mind and Allah too accepts it...but never cry as it willbringshame on you...beautiful poem. i loved it most....10 read mine cry not...placedcalled home...reality

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 December 2009

very well presented i say!

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