Confused Poem by Loyd C Taylor Sr

Confused

Rating: 5.0


What's wrong with this crazy place?
Right seems wrong and vice versa's cool.
People have question marks on their face.

Aimless, like upstairs there's vacant space;
Are they part of the "who's stupid" pool?
What's wrong with this crazy place?

Chasing empty dreams will then displace;
No common sense and they act the fool;
People have question marks on their face.

Playing life's game is a dangerous chase;
Deceit and corruption has made them drool.
What's wrong with this crazy place?

Living in the maze of life's rat race,
Learning their habits in the wrong school,
People have question marks on their face.

They need badly to find their space,
Not be stubborn like a stupid mule.
What's wrong with this crazy place?
People have question marks on their face.

Saturday, December 6, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: confusion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marilyn Lott 06 December 2008

It does seem like that, Lloyd but I have faith that it will change. But, it must get worse before it gets better. Confusion is definitely what the world is going through - great thoughts! A '10! ' from me, my friend. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Mamta Agarwal 06 December 2008

nobody knows right from wrong, you have expressed well the utter confusion in the mind of people.10simple in presentation deep in theme, Mamta

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