Congratulations Poem by Elizabeth Robinson

Congratulations

Rating: 4.7


"Willy nilly runs the river
Without an original edition."

I think about death
and so it appears, like a ghost with legs of uneven length.

Each step makes a noise, an uneven chatter
that turns just outside the window of my mind like a brook.

No, I am not troubled by this visitation because
death is a facsimile, a fundamental

awkwardness. All felicities

I bestow on so earnest an attempt at imitation. I imitate it
myself, with an accommodating stumble.

The susurrus of death tells me that nothing is cleanly divisible,
that life is a current that wends crookedly.

But the ghost beguiles and I cannot resist putting my hands in,
wrist-deep, pulling apart where I reach, finally, the stream

of the original,
the prime number, the place where parting cannot occur.

Indivisible or lopsided.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 24 September 2016

Awesome poem, Nicely written. But the ghost beguiles and I cannot resist putting my hands in, wrist-deep, pulling apart where I reach, finally, the stream of the original....

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Ratnakar Mandlik 24 September 2016

Death is a natural and unavoidable phenomenon for every life. Hence, it is always better to accept the fact willingly and seek enjoyment in it too. Thanks for sharing this meaningful and interesting poem.

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Mizzy ........ 24 September 2016

Interesting view on a subject that's both unavoidable and final. Enjoyed the read!

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 September 2016

Of the original! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Elizabeth Robinson

Elizabeth Robinson

Denver, Colorado, United States
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