You are not alone;
(even though that is how you seem to be.)
Some will notice you, the others won't;
(‘cause I’m invisible and you’re with me.)
I am empty; I’m like the echo of a crowded town.
I’m affectionless; I dry illusions and put your hopes all down.
You are not alone;
(even though that is how you seem to be.)
Some notice you, the others don’t,
(‘cause I’m invisible and you’re with me.)
You are with me; we’re like an invisible and spoiled presence.
We aren’t really empty; we are just desert, lonely, and full of absence.
You are not alone;
(even though that is how you seem to be.)
Some notice you, the others don’t,
(‘cause I’m invisible and you’re with me.)
We are together; I’m the company that you can’t see.
Won’t be there forever; just until you manage not to be with me...
Loneliness.
Lonliness is hard. Your poem shows strength and is touched with hope. Even that which cannot be seen, can still be felt. Nice choice of words to describe how it can be. DC
a self monologue written in eloquence. Nice repeatition of phrases....THanks for sharing this fine poem...keep on writing and welcome to PH....10
I dont know this bracket kind of put me offf but continue 2 write
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I am empty; I’m like the echo of a crowded town. I’m affectionless; I dry illusions and put your hopes all down..........like a silky shadow of dream, wonderful imagery,10++, thanks for sharing