Brad Combs

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Consuming The Forsaken Mind - Poem by Brad Combs

I once loved
The excitment, the thrill
The life i lived
But only fate will play
For this world is unfair
Its not right
We stand their with only thoughts
and cares of nothing or no one
We are a self destroying race
For with no cares and no thoughts
We will only consume the forsaken mind

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  • Rookie Effie Yalena Steyn (1/9/2008 11:30:00 AM)

    Wow! I love this, its such a great sentiment, though I did reread and reread to let it sink in. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 9, 2008

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