Cool Dude........ Poem by YURI DURAAN

Cool Dude........

Rating: 4.3


You are a cool dude
As cool as ice…

You speak the right language
drive the right car
you cut your hair just so
and buy the correct labels
you attend important functions
and speak your liberal mind
you belong to expensive clubs
and bid the highest at charity balls

You are indeed a cool dude
Indeed as cool as ice.....

but your eyes belie the outward
signs and tell of what hides within -
that all you want is to melt
and dissolve into a puddle of
unconditional love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 06 May 2008

the intersting thing is that there is lot of insight in girl poets........they know what they want and they feeel it right, , , , , , , , the cool dude yea, has all the things but wants to melt in unconditional love.......thanxx for sharing

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 March 2008

dude when cool by the grace love seems to be chilled by the snowfrost pine love as belied by the guilts of guile..............yet lucid piece, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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