I am unreachable
floating amongst the stars
removed from all things mundane
- no soil on my hands
- no dust under my feet..
just light..
a whole sun full
a whole bucket of stars full
I am light.
Keep the salt for the blunderers
who trudge forward in a circle
toiling meaninglessly..
those who move rocks from one
mountain to the next
Let there be one man who will
climb a mountain to reach me,
to bring me a stone …
I shall give him of my light
and let him share the stars
for maybe this one night.
Pragtig! en as daai man opdaag, kan jy dalk uitvind of hy 'n suster het! ;)
Very nice! ! Awesome imagery, especially floating in the stars. My only question is why bring a rock to you? I was thinking more like flowers, maybe chocolate. But I guess whatever floats your boat haha -david
Bright and challenging words...the last two stanzas are the most i liked in this classy write...well-done, Yuri...10
Good morning Uuri, I admire your abilty to write in more than one language and I have enjoyed your awesome poetry. Thanks, Loyd
Woman is shining in her, at the end, found identity.
fine piece, , , , that stone of earth, , , the man climbing, , good imagery, , go on yuri
Powerful piece... no starry-eyes here, as your unexpected ending suggests... stellar work. t x
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely write Yuri I am absolutely certain they are al standing in line at this very moment, gemstone in the post 10 Chris