Correct Me 2 Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Correct Me 2

Rating: 5.0


Correct me with judgement but,
Not in your anger! !

With righteous laws,
Able to control your status,

Able to correct me,
For me to learn from the works of the truth.

Correct me with judgement but,
Not in your anger! !

Living and Learning always,
Living in peace with my neighbours;

Moving on,
With righteous works,

With righteous morals!
Servitude and attitude along the line.

Thursday, August 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: peaceful,poetic expression,positiveness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 31 August 2019

Positive words needed to correct a person. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 August 2019

Yeah, correct me, o friend correct me by true judgement correct me not by your inimical angry fang! ! !

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