Could A Fish Be The Cause Of Our Disagreement? (Is A Fish In Between Us - A Bone Of Contention?) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Could A Fish Be The Cause Of Our Disagreement? (Is A Fish In Between Us - A Bone Of Contention?)

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My friends affirm that I am an adept at cooking fish, flawlessly,
although my spouse disagrees, vehemently.

She claims I always overdo the cooking,
but I find them just right, without any mistaking.

I prefer mine crispy, she likes them tender,
our opinions differ, but we won't surrender.

So, we struck a deal, as all great partners do,
I'll cook them her way, and she'll cook them mine (too) .

Together we'll experiment, and hopefully, (we'll find)
a method to prepare fish that pleases our combined mind.

We have been endeavoring for past two decades or so,
but haven't reached anywhere to resolve our woe.

Wednesday, June 14, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: husband ,wife,fighting,humorous,lessons of life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
And we keep trying for past 20 years or so but haven't reached anywhere to resolve our issue. Just to please her I say wow so tasty and different, and to please me she also repeat but we both know....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 14 June 2023

Hey! I think maybe you made up the whole story. My regards to 'the Mrs.'. bri : )

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M. Asim Nehal 15 June 2023

True, Yes, it is a fictitious poem, but you are familiar with its theme, especially after a few years when you begin to criticize the food and she has the chance to contradict you.

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Poetic Sky 14 June 2023

As soon as you become husband and wife these things comes up and bone of contention can be any silly thing.

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Bri Edwards 14 June 2023

Poetic Sky, You sound like you've experienced it. Good luck. I'm 'on wife # 4; tell me about contention! ! ! : )

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Darren Jkoeryo 08 August 2023

Fishy? ? ? I smell something else.......

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Sheeya Hacks 16 June 2023

Ha ha ha. I think it could be. You shouldn't try not to avoid and fight for your rights.

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Bri Edwards 15 June 2023

Asim, I plan to put this poem into my June 2023 Showcase of PH poems I share with members. bri ;)

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Bharati Nayak 14 June 2023

Nice poem! You both are trying not to allow a small contention to snowball into larger one.A great effort to keep marital harmony intact.

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Kim Barney 14 June 2023

Sounds a bit fishy to me... : ) : ) : )

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M. Asim Nehal 15 June 2023

Whole story is Fishy, Yes, it is a fictitious poem, but you are familiar with its theme, especially after a few years of marriage, don't you?

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