Let Spring Come - Love, Love, Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Let Spring Come - Love, Love, Love

Rating: 5.0


The seed of love is lying in my heart
the clouds are becoming heavy
the air has become cool and breezy
mountains stands tall and steady
and my hopes are floating on waves
the leaves are rustling so my wishes
and all are desperate to see the dream come true
and this spring is on door steps
the first droplet dances past the eagle
peacock opened its wings
the breeze carries the fragrance
and in seconds the spring zooms

Monday, July 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 21 July 2017

Love changes the season of the heart. Everything looks bright n beautiful as it does in spring. A beautiful write, fresh n vibrant as love n spring. A 10.

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M Asim Nehal 05 December 2018

Thanks much, Nosheen.

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Jameel Khan 06 April 2019

A wonderful poem on spring love..10+

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Sebastian G 12 October 2020

Wow seed of love waiting for the spring to bloom

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Denis Mair 16 November 2023

Yes, the mood of springtime often rushes like sudden gusts of wind.

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Darren Jkoeryo 03 February 2023

Excellent poem refreshing always.

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Martinez Salotori 29 January 2022

Amusing poem, I liked the flow and wordings.

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Poetic Sky 16 March 2023

Truly magnificent poem.

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Ricky Magnathen 13 November 2021

Congratulation once again.

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Tihama Hykam 14 October 2021

All the way spring season.

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