Crash! Poem by Sandra Feldman

Crash!

Rating: 4.6


I follow you into the darkness
Of our lost dreams,
Where there is no longer
Hope,
For either one of us,
Nor great esteem.

We were once
Under the fascination
Of false esteem:
I thought you were
You thought, I was
We both were so,
So out of touch!

A whole life wasted
Fatal mistake,
The time surrendered
All false and fake
And now when finally
To truth, we wake
We realize sadly
Time has run out,
The love
We promised
Sadly, was
Our deepest failure
And constant doubt.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 19 December 2021

A free verse written with so much love and feelings. Touching.5 stars****

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Susheela Alexiose 28 December 2021

Hold on to that love Sandra! ! whole life is not wasted! ! ! you can live each lost moment the rest of your life with your loved one! ! ! please

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Aarzoo Mehek 22 December 2021

Love that dies an untimely death is so painful. So beautifully expressed. Love reading it

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 December 2021

A beautiful poem so wonderfully written. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 December 2021

Deeply poignant and touching. A love so greatly felt, when lost, will always haunt us. Every memoriy woven in the heart will strike the core of one's heart.

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David Wood 20 December 2021

Beautifully expressed but so sad. When love dies it is best to make a clean break and gorge a new future alone, or with someone new.

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