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A Different Love


There was very little physical about their love,
It went well beyond all that,
Like two Swans whose necks intertwine,
Creating an everlasting bond,
They embraced, floating away together,
Into the Eternity of Time,
Forever

Submitted: Sunday, March 09, 2014
Edited: Monday, March 10, 2014

Topic(s): love


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  • Silver Star - 7,753 Points Roseann Shawiak (10/28/2014 11:37:00 PM)

    You have very poetically described an unconditional love, almost divine, in a perfect poem of fascinating love. It sends the mind looking and wishing for this type of love, but it is very rare in life to find it. Thank you. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,578 Points Achill Lad (10/6/2014 8:23:00 AM)

    The physical side to a loving relationship is a bonus. Love has so much more to offer. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,621 Points Walterrean Salley (9/20/2014 4:37:00 PM)

    Congrats on your selected poem of the day. Sincere and profound thoughts on one of the most important subjects in life- expressed in purity. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,211 Points Sandra Feldman (9/16/2014 3:50:00 AM)

    Yesterday, Sept.15,2014 I was Queen for a Day. But not of a Country nor a Kingdom
    I was allowed to enter a tiny corner of the hearts of those that read this simple poem,
    What a Joy! Indescribable.

    To be able to touch others with words, make them feel, maybe a tiny instant of Love, beauty and illusion.
    What better Kingdom?
    Thank you All for reading and for your lovely, comments! Every one of them touched me deeply.

    I also want to thank PoemHunter for giving me this honor for which I am truly grateful.

    Sandra Feldman (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,226 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (9/15/2014 9:39:00 PM)

    It is the same love what many preachers had preached to develop in the hearts of human.. Here, you have written about the friends, but loving an enemy may change our mind set to believe the effects of the eternal love in one's heart, mind and body, that's the reason the sages look younger to their age..so to look younger we have to develop the feeling of love for every human around the world, just like these two swans intertwined with their necks not with the corporate deals

    nice poem.. Congratulations (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,634 Points Terry Craddock (9/15/2014 5:21:00 PM)

    Simplistic, indifferent to stylistic form and traditions, yet as beautiful as two swans necks intertwined, floating together within the waters of eternity. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,371 Points Lyn Paul (9/15/2014 5:13:00 PM)

    Beautiful words Sandra. You are like a photographer. You always capture the moment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 393 Points Michelle Claus (9/15/2014 3:34:00 PM)

    The first line of your poem grabbed my attention. The physical story of love eventually, or immediately, leaves us so lonely and wanting. So, I had to continue to read your poem to find out what was the nature of their love. Nicely scribed, with regal imagery. I agree with an earlier comment, that this poem is written as if it could be read in one breath - to mirror the penultimate moment of true love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 379 Points Lenny Camacho (9/15/2014 11:46:00 AM)

    time is not eternal, but moments are, and this one poem has become one of mine... thank you... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 183 Points Crystal Rosser (9/15/2014 11:22:00 AM)

    At first, it felt a little bit cliche, but overall, I really liked the simplicity and modesty. Nicely done. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,573 Points Savita Tyagi (9/15/2014 9:29:00 AM)

    Lovely poem. Gives such a mesmerizing feeling about love. Loved reading it as a member poem. Congratulations. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,340 Points Daniel Brick (9/15/2014 7:02:00 AM)

    This is a true expression of love, a higher love than we normally conceive, the sort once referred as a Platonic Love.
    Shakespeare wrote a brilliant but knotty lyric poem THE PHOENIX AND THE TURTLE(DOVE) which expresses these same sentiments. Your poem would certainly help people confused by his lush language, Back to Sandra's poem: I like the way you made this one sentence by using commas to extend it. It all takes place in a single breath, a held breath in this suspended moment in which we acknowledge the truth and wonder of an uncommon love. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,354 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/15/2014 3:23:00 AM)

    A love poem that leads to eternity the peculiarity of this poem - it gives a panorama as if i am watching the two loved swan necks intertwined congrates to you a deserving poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Kirti Sharma (7/19/2014 12:44:00 PM)

    :) love sees nothing...
    only cares about the partner...
    how strongly they are bonded..

    Like two Swans whose necks intertwine,
    Creating an everlasting bond...
    lovely! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Willy Ortiz (7/6/2014 4:21:00 PM)

    gracias por traer recuerdos de esa chica especial que me falta,
    exquisito poema! .................................................. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 343 Points F. J. Thomas (6/30/2014 10:36:00 AM)

    You didn't have to use many words to make one yearn for the connection you've described. Beautiful Sandra :) (Report) Reply

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