Lodi Cj Ludovik

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Crow's Are Pigeon's With A Black Coat


Pigeon's in crow's coat's
black songed with lost voice
throughout sky's passed
in ceremony from dozen's
to thousand's on air.

Submitted: Tuesday, January 28, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, January 29, 2014

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lodi Cj Ludovik (Logout) Follow replies to my reviewsMy rating: Summary:
November 21.2012*
Review:
at 11: 06 Am
Absolutely Brilliant

Oliver ShermanNEW389 days agoyou used very little words to create a picture that was worth a million words. Excellent work keep writingComment +1

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Nov.21.2012

good
Levell BrownlowNEW389 days agogood jobComment +2

November 21.2012*
Ludovik CelajNEW434 days agoat 11: 06 AmComment +3

Nice imagery

Tochukwu EsqNEW167 days agoGoodComment 0

a poem of many
Alan Green 'Guppyman'NEW434 days agothe poet tells of the masses of irdsComment +3

its k
Akash LamaNEW434 days agoIts kComment +2

Nice

Franco RodriguezNEW434 days agoNice!

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