Crowning........... Poem by LifeIz MENtalseductionz

Crowning...........

Rating: 3.5


Overly amBITous at least I've been told
Once they made me they didn't break the mold
I re-invented added futuristic features BIT nail to tooth getting
on top being so bold
Only in lines are where there sold
No shops to dropp by to find this unique Gold
No factory to question lines of where abouts of findings no bluffs
no fold
No dispute word to the wise both blind & mute
Surgically precise alphabets into words execute
Musical wonder like covering holes on the flute
Air raising like a jumper to shoot
Intense with wonders plugged in monitors don't compute
You ask seating there not sure to be or not to be stun
There has to be a follow up if they made one
Over a Land of people words govern, only out of sheets of paper
are achievements CROWNING.......
No gems to speak of verbs & nouns astound like the rising of the
Sun Adjectives
To the Moon on pages Life it gives
No chair
For Queen nor King not even a Heir
Verses make paragraphs, that make you smile & even laugh POETICALLY course Continents sentiments of fyne writing all
are able to share
Inside of imagination Penmanship bleed leaving you thirstily drowning...


~~MENtalseductionz
02-12-08

3: 25-3: 30 p.m

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