Cry Blood Poem by nayeli contreras

Cry Blood

Rating: 5.0


a tear
a single tear hides
a million lies a million why's?
a million loved and then it diez
and a drop
a single dropp of blood hides
another cell an angel fell
a fake smile pretend your well
some cry,
some bleed,
but only a few like me,
cry blood

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gold Fish 14 October 2009

This poem holds much significance and I can feel the words that you speak. The pain is crystal clear; These lines are powerful: 'some cry, some bleed, but only a few like me, cry blood' 'a fake smile pretend your well' I know this feeling all too well. Thanks for sharing. 10+ Keep writing it's good for the heart and mind. I encourage you to read some of my poems; read what appeals to you, but these may be of interest 'The Invisible Disease' 'Pain' 'In the Back of My Mind' or 'Depression.' Thanks.

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