Cryptic Critic Poem by RIC BASTASA

Cryptic Critic



there is one thing
with you
that to me is
very wrong

you're too formal
with that coat
and tie
and those shiny
black shoes
and that
gel on your hair

we are not going
to a party
we are going to the
hills

take those off.
i don't mean that
we go there
naked.

what? the guns?

RIC BASTASA
Sunday, May 16, 2010
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