Kevin Patrick

Freshman - 1,849 Points (Taurus / Ontario)

Cygnus Delta


Through a tall grove, by a mouse stream,
Basking on a knoll in noonday
Watching, as the sunlight drowns in green
Living in a bubble out from pain

Little warbler, high above me, sings forever chirpy songs,
Although I can't see, I feel it all the same
Ripples forming in crystal waters, calling your Naiad mother
Laughing, as a child's free to escape

Driving off to Cygnus Delta
traveling without a charter
a thousand light years where I'm dreaming
Free to roam the stars outside of space and endless time

Submitted: Friday, June 06, 2014
Edited: Saturday, August 02, 2014

Topic of this poem: nature


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Cygnus, the Swan is the north cross because of its shape, one legend is that Cygnus Cygnus is a friend of Phaethon, the son of Apollo, the sun god. Phaethon fell into the river Eridanus, trying to drive the sun-gods chariot. Cygnus dove repeatedly into the water to search for Phaethon. Out of pity, Zeus turned the boy into a swan.

Comments about this poem (Cygnus Delta by Kevin Patrick )

  • Gold Star - 10,508 Points * Sunprincess * (7/1/2014 2:38:00 PM)

    ............loved this one from beginning to end....only I was truly expecting and hoping for one more stanza....but the poet's notes at the end was truly a pleasure to read like having dessert after dinner.....definitely adding this one to my favourite poem collection....truly enjoyed this fantastic piece... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,688 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (6/8/2014 1:42:00 AM)

    Wow stellar. Whisks me into another galaxy i must say. Awesome flying muse.
    And the mythical take is entertaining. I like the sound of cygnus. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 37 Points Colleen Courtney (6/7/2014 6:07:00 PM)

    A wonderful and enchanting read! Thanks for the added Poet's note. I still love reading the Greek Myths! (Report) Reply

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