Butterfly Words Poem by Kevin Patrick

Butterfly Words

Rating: 5.0


A poem is a catch
Of butterfly words
That I chase with a pen
Within a paper mesh

The similes scamper
But I pinch their rims
My eyes are for rhyme
Though I never have time


I seek to make beauty
Collected in prose
In a language safari
For a substitute Hobby


My styles amateur
And not so complex
But I love a good Verse
With rare Haiku figures


A poem is catch
Of butterfly words
That flutters in the sky
Only seeing in my mind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kaila George 27 June 2012

Slaps you on the back....BRILLANT....smiles pfffft i say you write great poetry, and dont make me repeat myself...(lol lol lol)

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Walterrean Salley 04 July 2012

Pleasant. Creative and insightful. A good job here.

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Heather Wilson 08 July 2012

Delightful poem, a really enjoyable read.. loved the last verse.

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Ramesh Rai 04 October 2014

Nicely penned. well crafted. loved the line A poem is catch Of butterfly words That flutters in the sky Only seeing in my mind.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 October 2014

A poem is catch Of butterfly words That flutters in the sky Only seeing in my mind Nice and beautiful.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 February 2022

My styles And not so complex But I love a good Verse With rare Haiku figures....I liked this truthful expression.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 February 2022

A poem is catch Of butterfly words That flutters in the sky......wonderful perception. I liked this beautiful poem. Top score!

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Bharati Nayak 16 March 2021

A poem is a catch Of butterfly words That I chase with a pen Within a paper mesh---A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 March 2021

Well crafted with superb imagery. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 March 2021

A lovely poem adorned with great imagination

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