Cynical Poem by Brian Merski

Cynical



Too many have I seen
Trapped within such bitter ice
So cold it cannot ever melt
Though bathed in warmth of paradise,
they do not share the joy I've felt
Oh!
To see a kind heart start to rust-
form a frozen, cruel, crust
Too proud to ever make amends,
and brittle when the world bends
To see it blind to many friends
On which its life and joy depends
And while that shell does fail to mend
It does prevent the love I send
Truly is it clinical,
To be so very cynical.

Saturday, February 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: coldness,corruption,cynical,heart,helpless,losing friends,loss,love and loss
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
After watching my cousin (and her family) trying to cope with her brother's death.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 06 February 2016

I admire your fresh unexpected point of feeling.It is a characteristic only true poets have.

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Gajanan Mishra 06 February 2016

to see a kind heart, I like it, thanks..

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