Dad Poem by paul monte

Dad



Hey dad, look i'm over here, oh you don't want to look.Does it hurt you.How do you think it was for me.You were never looking, they take me and want to send me thousands of miles away.now do you wonder how I feel.I could blame you for everything, But I don't; I just wanted a dad it did't come as planned. Maybe in your next life, cause this life has been invisiable.You never seen me Dad.look at me now, oh how bad it hurts..

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Rachel Butler 08 November 2009

'You never seen me Dad.look at me now' Rachel Ann Butler

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Moriah Reyes 07 November 2009

very nice...I liked it! ! i wish it had been longer and gone into more detail about why you are hurt....but then sometimes thats all it takes....for someone not to see. Best wishes!

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