You left this world without a trace
And now i can't reach your face
Where could you be
Why aren't you here with me
I'll make it threw this at my own pace
not bad. straight to it. i made one called dear dad but i like the suddenness of yours better =)
veary sad but touching poem. i do believe you have talent at such a young age. keep up the good work.
this is a very beautiful poem. It is short, simple, and to the point. Who knew so little words could mean so much. very beautiful.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
not bad. straight to it. i made one called dear dad but i like the suddenness of yours better =)