I walk in the room
And feel you’re presence
I feel you’re near
People think I’m crazy,
When I ‘talk to myself’
But really I’m talking to you.
Some people think
When you turn to talk
And no one is there
That there is just a spirit.
Someone you love.
Someone who cares.
And someone who hasn’t
Finished what they need to do.
But daddy, come back!
I know you can hear me,
I know you’re there.
The day you died,
I died inside
I didn’t want to live a day longer.
The day I wed,
Will you be there?
Even if you cant walk me down the aisle?
I need to know,
Give me a sign
So I can fall asleep tonight…
Or I might die…
So touching. Really nice. Every child needs a daddy. But one of the saddest things in the world is that many dads are not around. Please let me know what you think of my poem
That was very nice, I'm not going to be like other ppl and say stupid stuff like....'don't worry it'll all work out' or whatever. But one thing I can say is, keep up the good work.
This a very touching piece you have written here, thank you for sharing it with us. May you find peace and joy you are seeking deep within your heart once again. Scott
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great poem. Beautifully written. Sorry about your dad!