Lailoni Marie

Rookie - 97 Points (11\22\92 / Los Angeles)

Daddy Gave His Little Girl The Blue's - Poem by Lailoni Marie

I always looked up to my dad
I thought my dad was the coolest, smoothest dad ever
I like for my dad to come to my school and pick me up
And all of my homegirls use to ask me who is that
And I always said that's my dad ain't he so cool
Until I left school and found him with my best friend
And every since then daddy gave me the blue's

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life

Comments about Daddy Gave His Little Girl The Blue's by Lailoni Marie

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (2/10/2009 11:57:00 AM)

    This one really hurts. This is pretty bad. I hate to read this kind of thing. It
    undercuts one of the great relationships as I see it. The one between a father
    and a daughter. This was well written. A good structure as well. A great
    ending that sealed the deal. Wonderful!

    GW62 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 6, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 4, 2015

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