valentine white

Rookie (11\22\92 / Los Angeles)

Daddy Gave His Little Girl The Blue's - Poem by valentine white

I always looked up to my daddy
I thought my daaddy was the coolest, smoothest daddy every
I liked for my dad to come up to my school
I like for my daddy to come to my school and pick me up form school
And all of my homegirls use to ask me who is that?
And I always say that's my daddy can't he so cool
Until I left school and found him with my best friend
And every since then daddy gave me the blue's? ? ? ? ?
Part: 1


Comments about Daddy Gave His Little Girl The Blue's by valentine white

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (2/10/2009 11:57:00 AM)

    This one really hurts. This is pretty bad. I hate to read this kind of thing. It
    undercuts one of the great relationships as I see it. The one between a father
    and a daughter. This was well written. A good structure as well. A great
    ending that sealed the deal. Wonderful!

    GW62 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 6, 2009



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