Damsel Lovestory Poem by Pakshal Patel

Damsel Lovestory

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I saw her,
she saw me.
Many time this occurred.
Then Crashing of eyes.

Gave a sweet smile,
I returned the same.
Stopped heart for a while,
To get her-only the aim.

I had picture's rein.
Went her to set up glory.
Suddenly, bus entered as villain.
Tragic end of damsel love story!

Monday, September 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 02 September 2015

A wonderful poem, Pakshal. Thanks for sharing Peace

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Pakshal Patel 07 September 2015

Thank you..... It means a lot to me...

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Mamta Sharma 04 November 2014

wonderful portrayal of feelings........... beautiful rendering.......... Keep Writing

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