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dance of love

did you leave me here alone
to face this world of emptiness
while i wanted to have the dance of love with you
did you leave me here alone
to face this silence
i wanted to whisper the song of love, into your ears
while my hands were dancing on your skin
feeling the warmth of your body
did you leave me here alone
to face this dark night alone
while i need the candle of hope, burning
with warmth and light
in our all cold and dark nights.

Submitted: Thursday, March 09, 2006
Edited: Saturday, February 02, 2013


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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (4/7/2008 6:11:00 AM)

    night yet wishful by the remniscence
    as each speckles of darkness whispers the love.................yet luscious rippling by the ingenuity, , , , brilliant,10/10, thanks for sharing

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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (2/1/2008 11:08:00 AM)

    heartwarming love poem, thanks for sharing

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  • Aashish Ameya (3/9/2006 2:23:00 AM)

    i like the thought but didn't like the way you said it...any way good try....

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