Ken e Hall

Rookie (Last Century / England-Now Australian Citizen)

*** Dancing In Flowers *** - Poem by Ken e Hall

You're dancing in flowers this lover's fair
I'm stepping on clouds floating on air,
Swinging on stars dreaming on cue
Sliding down rainbows nearer to you,

You hide behind daisies with buttercup class
Still peeking thru' locks of a golden haired lass,
A bunny falls back as you quickly dance by
As I float down from the super blue sky.

Ah, I see you soft an' so still in a beautiful pose
Smiling hiding in the folds of a rose,
For a kiss indeed I miss thorns so scary,
Inside the rose it's all in a day's work for the love
......................................... ....................
of a fairy.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about *** Dancing In Flowers *** by Ken e Hall

  • Gold Star - 15,405 Points Pamela Sinicrope (11/23/2015 6:55:00 AM)

    Wow! This was the best imagery. I felt just like a love fairy as I read it. I wish I could slide down a love rainbow! The imagery at the end got a bit more complex, which kept the poem interesting. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thanks! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 19,668 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (10/9/2015 9:52:00 AM)

    You're dancing in flowers this lover's fair
    I'm stepping on clouds floating on air,
    Swinging on stars dreaming on cue
    Sliding down rainbows nearer to you, such a lovely poem with lots and lots of images. your imagination is amazing. i loved reading it. thank you very much (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 26,590 Points Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/30/2015 9:49:00 PM)

    Verily, a lovely rhyming verse (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 50,619 Points Akhtar Jawad (7/25/2015 6:55:00 AM)

    The poem is beautiful painting, simply amazing and wonderful. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,762 Points Ayman Parray (6/6/2015 7:05:00 AM)

    An amazing poem, Ken. Brings a smile to my heart and eases my mind of worldly cares. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,241 Points Allotey Abossey (6/6/2015 12:39:00 AM)

    This poem is biut'ful and I love the flow, like a song. God bless you (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,778 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (5/6/2015 9:44:00 PM)

    A lovely verse, thank you for the smile!
    A Poet Who Loves To Sing (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,669 Points Elena Sandu (5/2/2015 3:58:00 PM)

    How could I miss this gem? Inloved with your poem! Yes, the dance of beauty could make us walk on clouds. Hiding between daisies with buttercup class a wonderful choice of words, splendid imaagery, who would not love such richness! Thank you for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,111 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (4/17/2015 12:50:00 PM)

    Wow fantastic! I read more of yor poems today but this one was of the masterpieces! So imaginative and creative and makes readers soar with yor words and fly like fairies. Kudos! Great to read u again. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,700 Points Hazel Durham (2/25/2015 9:23:00 AM)

    Such a beautiful, charming poem with inspired lines that give a touch of magic to this truly delightful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,748 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (2/8/2015 12:16:00 PM)

    Hello poet Ken. This was an absolutely charming poem, well done. Loyd Taylor (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,431 Points L. E. O. Gibraltar (1/21/2015 12:04:00 AM)

    A lovely poem! Beautiful imagery that allows the reader to see the love in the air. Loved it! Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,130 Points John Ugolo Umah (1/11/2015 2:09:00 PM)

    Wow! I applaud this sire, I so much love to be loved and this piece is just so wonderful, keep writing sire. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 804 Points Jeri Martindale (12/27/2014 3:02:00 PM)

    I knew she was a fairy! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Amanda Grube (11/25/2014 12:45:00 AM)

    love this one. it make think about everything happened to me (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 421 Points Shania K. Younce (10/18/2014 1:57:00 PM)

    This is truly a beautiful poem. Bien! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,117 Points Mihaela Pirjol (9/23/2014 4:52:00 AM)

    Such a sweet and romantic poem... with great rhythm and rhyme scheme. Lovely! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 427 Points Chris Zachariou (7/12/2014 6:35:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem. It takes me to another world where there is magic and wonder. And the sweetness of love, great. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,462 Points Valsa George (6/30/2014 5:37:00 AM)

    The dance and movements of this fairy are so delicate and sweet.....! I visualize her hiding and smiling in the folds of a rose..... Just lovely! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 45 Points Colleen Courtney (6/20/2014 6:32:00 AM)

    Oh! As a lover of fairies, unicorns and all things mystical and whimsical, I can't help but not fall in love with this poem! Had me enchanted from that wonderful first stanza! Have already added to my list of favorites! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 1, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, July 24, 2015

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