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*** Dancing in Flowers ***

You're dancing in flowers this lover's fair
I'm stepping on clouds floating on air,
Swinging on stars dreaming on cue
Sliding down rainbows nearer to you,

You hide behind daisies with buttercup class
Still peeking the locks of a golden haired lass,
A bunny falls back as you quickly dance by
As I float down from the super blue sky.

Ah, I see you soft an' so still in a beautiful pose
Smiling hiding in the folds of a rose,
For a kiss indeed I miss thorns so scary,
Inside the rose it's all in a day's work for the love
......................................... ....................
of a fairy.

Submitted: Wednesday, June 01, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, January 29, 2013

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  • Jarea` Poet (10/3/2013 4:21:00 AM)

    very 'airy'... visuals with your pen.. nicely done..

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  • Patricia Grantham (8/15/2013 8:14:00 PM)

    A very nice lilting poem. So daintily put in details that it
    makes me feel as if I was just a little girl singing the song
    ring-around-the rosy pockets full of posies. Beautifully
    written Ken

  • Mohabeer Beeharry (8/15/2013 7:58:00 AM)

    I like the imagery the poem invokes. Sweet and tentative. Good write.

    Mohabeer Beeharry

  • Heather Wilkins (6/19/2013 9:18:00 PM)

    lovely with nice imagery.

  • Sally Plumb Plumb (9/3/2012 11:32:00 AM)

    Lovely and light and summery.

  • Elna Nel (8/13/2012 1:46:00 PM)

    This is a beautiful piece of work!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/31/2012 6:07:00 AM)

    So inside the rose it�s all in a day�s work for the love
    ............................................................. of a fairy... so lovely imagination nicely portrayed....10

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (10/8/2011 8:08:00 AM)

    wow what a very cute poem
    it lightens a reader's mood

  • Terence George Craddock (9/19/2011 11:51:00 PM)

    Dancing In Flowers At A Lover’s Fair

    ever since all Ken's dancing on ship cruises
    every time you mention dancing I have visions
    of legendary Fred Astaire and Ginger Rodgers
    I see them dance floral scenes among flowers

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock

  • Malaya Roses (6/3/2011 6:37:00 AM)

    A fairy tales of love in such soothing passion... complexity in love and feeling was transferred into a beautiful poem...! !
    Well done my friend! !

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