Dark Poem by victoria dupree

Dark

Rating: 5.0


Alone in the dark.
All by myself.
I hear the constant cries of my soul.
It's shattered.
It's broken.
I trusted you with my heart.
I thought you was my friend.
I trusted you with my secret.
But yet you turn away from me.
You pulled me out of the darkness.
But you shoved me right back in.
I trusted you
I loved you.
So why do you do this.
Do my feelings mean nothing to you.
Why, I need to know.
Why did you hurt me.
You can't blame this one on others.
your at fault.
you are the one to blame.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Konstantin Filipov 06 May 2010

I love the darkness in your poems. A ten from me

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Louis Rams 23 April 2010

very well written! a friend is someone who shows they care. a friend is someone who is always there. a friend is someone in which you can confide. a friend is someone who stays by your side. a double ten.

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