Dark Room Poem by Nebil Elias

Dark Room

Rating: 5.0


As I enter this room
I hear whispers whenever I move
I kept following the sound
But there is no one around
Darkness is what surrounds

A place so cold,
Made my body shiver which I can't hold
Broken windows and wrecked chair,
Is all I stare
Walls full of memories
Rhymes its melodies

As I was walking, a shadow of a girl appeared
As I got closer, it disappeared
This place is so strange
Since I entered this room, I feel pain
Flashback of the past hunting my brain
I don't want to feel this way
I've fallen to the same old game, once again
Who knows how to escape this place
I will keep walking until I find a way

Tuesday, August 24, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: pain,darkness,journey
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 15 September 2021

Good write.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 September 2021

A gripping and deeply poignant poem. A well expressed write.

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KAVIN CHARALAN 15 September 2021

Walls have ears I have read....they may be having lips too --scary poem

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