Darkness Poem by darin smyth

Darkness

Rating: 5.0


Restless rain
Windows unsound
One promise given
No longer around

Vacant pillow
Silent phone
Eyes wide open
One must atone

Ink on paper
Thoughts must send
Hopes all but lost
My soul to asend

Wednesday, May 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: darkness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 05 May 2016

Vacant pillow Silent phone Eyes wide open One must atone loneliness, depressive state of mind, lack of inner joy, meaninglessness, resignation. so many points came into my mind as i read your great poem. thank you dear poet. tony

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darin smyth

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