Daydream Poem by Morhardt Carmen Mencita Monoi Angel

Daydream

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Daydream


Why not have a very special dream

A daydream
In which you can do anything
lets fly into hot sunbeams
follow the heavenly path high up
over the appearing rainbow
look down at houses in a neat row
hear the churches bells ring
as well as childrens voices sing

A daydream
In which we could be all equal
Some sort of earthly paradise
Where sun eternally rises
Warming up the entire humanity
People caring and full of charity
Dancing and music daily occupation
What a magnificient intonation

A daydream
In which you can go anywhere
Places where everybody cares
Never alone and unhappy again
Moods tremendeously serene
Don’t ever stop to dream
like savouring a tasty smoothy cream
but nevertheless remember ……..it’s just a very special daydream


(Switzerland)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 19 April 2009

Very nice piece, lovely...

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James B. Earley 25 June 2008

'Places where everybody cares'........... What a wonderful world! Excellent.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 12 June 2008

Day dream.............good poem I like d the whole poem

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Greenwolfe 1962 12 June 2008

'Devoutly to be wished'.- W. Shakespeare I find your daydream a charming one. Your repetitional use of 'A daydream' at the beginning of each stanza was very necessary here. I'm glad that's what you did. You also communicated well. Very nice! GW62

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