Dead Or Alive? Poem by Natasha StubbsEnnis

Dead Or Alive?

Rating: 5.0


If you’re still alive,
Call my name,
If you’re still alive,
Tell me you’re not in pain,
If you’re still alive,
Come open the door.
All this blood tells me something more,
You’re eyes are open,
But you’re not breathing,
Stay with me my love,
For you’re the only one,
Take me with you,
Wherever you go.
Don’t leave me in the dark.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 17 October 2008

so touching, well done thanks for sharing 10

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Neil Marsden 17 October 2008

Very powerful and disturbing piece, provokes the reader to interpret as they like. Beauty is not measured by mirrors my friend, be sure of that. Take Care, Neil

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