Sanjukta Nag

Gold Star - 21,101 Points (05-07-1992 / India)

Dear God - Poem by Sanjukta Nag

You taught the dawn to break the cloud
You taught the birds to sing aloud
So, there cannot be any doubt
That night has gone to bed.

The sun starts to scatter its rays
The wind starts to find its ways
In hills forests deserts and bays
To obey what You said.

The morning is serene and sound
You made everything profound
I'll always follow You around
Bowing my heart and head.

Topic(s) of this poem: god

Comments about Dear God by Sanjukta Nag

  • Gold Star - 22,005 Points Melvina Germain (11/12/2015 3:03:00 PM)

    Such a beautiful devotion to our Heavenly Father, serene, soothing..... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,266 Points Vishal Sharma (10/19/2015 6:08:00 AM)

    love the way you rhyme your poetry lyrically awesome (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,399 Points Liza Sud Russia (9/23/2015 10:07:00 AM)

    very devotional to God! i'm impressed! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,404 Points Valsa George (9/19/2015 1:01:00 AM)

    A nicely rhyming sweet little poem where you describe God's great glory and your allegiance to Him! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,413 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (9/18/2015 7:59:00 AM)

    The morning is serene and sound
    You made everything profound
    I'll always follow You around
    Bowing my heart and head. Wonderful.. you know i love simple poems without any hard word to digest. you write such poetry. give you 10 ok (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,593 Points Miraj Raha (9/17/2015 9:07:00 AM)

    very nice rhythmic piece and flows smoothly, I love the fact that you associate god in everything you see and experience, shows how warm a person you are.I am fortunate to have found a poet like you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,573 Points Marie Shine (9/16/2015 5:59:00 AM)

    A very nice tribute to 'God' through Mother Nature! Excellent inking, Sanjukta. Thank you for sharing... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,216 Points Kinyua Karanja (9/11/2015 3:48:00 AM)

    God is author of all what is good and for us we have to obey Him for our own Good, I like this poem, thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,717 Points David Wood (9/10/2015 5:32:00 AM)

    God seen through nature, lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,928 Points Roseann Shawiak (9/6/2015 2:15:00 AM)

    Prayerfully poetical and inspirational, a powerful reminder to always follow and obey God! Beautiful poem, loved it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 51,817 Points Kumarmani Mahakul (9/5/2015 2:54:00 AM)

    Oh! What a marvellous poem it is. God's creation is perfect, so nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. .....10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 26,191 Points Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/5/2015 2:33:00 AM)

    Truly, God taught each one to perform its function,
    And made everything profound.

    I 'll always follow you around,
    Bowing my heart and head.

    The poetess has matured and proceeds
    towards attaining nirvana and salvation

    Loved reading the poem,
    Added to my poem list...........10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,314 Points T Rajan Evol (9/5/2015 2:16:00 AM)

    Wow poem, read it 3 times..Good job, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,911 Points Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/5/2015 1:52:00 AM)

    Truly devotional.......Almighty is supreme power with flawless management.............Awesome poem.....10 (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 5,314 Points T Rajan Evol (9/5/2015 2:17:00 AM)

    Very true.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 5, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, September 7, 2015

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