Death Of An Angel Poem by thomas coltrin

Death Of An Angel

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i dont know how to finish it...for it doesnt say how......u may help..thank you




I pick this person up
Just to try to help……
This person says he fell
From the sky above,
I thought he was just crazy
Because he seemed a little old……..
But when I touched his empty skin
Yet it was so very cold,
I felt a little bad
Because he had so many scars …….
I asked him ware he got them
He said “from fighting devils wars’’,
Again I thought he’s crazy
I thought he’s worshiping a Jain……
But then he started turning black
As if a molding stain,
He looked at me and said…
“I regret for leaving life
It was my last resort
My pain it was so strong”,
I grabbed his hand and felt
A pain beyond description…..
I can feel right through his heart
The hate, betrayed deception.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 16 April 2009

it has the essence of 'The Raven' by Edgar Allan Poe nice diction and words my friend.. great job and well done!

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