thomas coltrin

Rookie (march 14 1991 / russia....kolasin)

Emotionless - Poem by thomas coltrin

I wanna write a poem
One that will make u cry,
Something bout the past
And the futures lie…

About a little girl
That’s been raped every day,
And ever since she was three
She wanted to run away ….

About a love from her
A suicide from me,
About telling u that word
That will make u hang on a cord….

About a teenager who’s lost
And is on every kind of drug,
Because he lost hope of the day
When someone gives him a hug…

Something about a father
Who hits his son’s mother,
With the pain that’s been filled
His own son he by “accident” kills….

About a third world country
Kids blow them self’s gone,
And if u don’t do what they say
Then your suddenly wrong ….

Something about god
How he never forgives,
But makes u get on your knees
If not, your six feet deep….

I wanna write
That’s all I wanna do,
I wanna write a poem
Only for you….


Comments about Emotionless by thomas coltrin

  • Rookie Mel Vincent Basconcillo (5/8/2009 12:45:00 AM)

    your words are equally as potent as a thunderbolt..it gets u going! marvelous flow my friend great work (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie immortal Butterfly (5/3/2009 10:12:00 PM)

    Wow This Is Amazing. I've Never Read Anything So Powerful.
    ~Autumn~ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 3, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 12, 2009


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