Deceitful Poem by Crazy Vampire

Deceitful



i'm sorry i betrayed your trust
i fell, not for love, but for lust
i understand that i can't rewind the past
i know it's my fault, that we did not last

but all i can say is forgive me
if you want to leave, go ahead, i agree
i feel sick and horrible to the core
my pride and dignity have sunken to the floor

but even if you forgive me, and want me back, i shall not accept
because of you and this mess i have wept
what more can i do and say?
i am sorry that you have been played.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Brock 20 April 2010

Very good flow in this one, I like the twist and feel of it. thanks for sharing Michael

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Crazy Vampire

Crazy Vampire

Hemet, California
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