Deceitful Door Poem by Pankaj Gawade

Deceitful Door

Rating: 4.6


Even she was not chained to anything
But wasn't free to go

Don't judge by looks stated the society
But that's a myth as she is earning more

Not a single scar on her face
Her heart is sinking in pain of sorrow

Thinking about how anyone can come but she isn't free to go

Door is same.
But for me its opportunity to make money.
For other it's opportunity to call me honey for 5 min or more.

Tuesday, November 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,life,sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 21 November 2017

Welcome to poemhunter.. A good start

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 November 2017

Wonderful start with an amazing poem..10

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Pankaj G. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Pankaj Gawade 21 November 2017

Thank you.

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Pankaj Gawade 21 November 2017

Thank you for your kind words chinedu dike and rini jerry.

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Chinedu Dike 21 November 2017

An insightful piece of poetry nicely embellished in poetic rhyme with conviction. Beautiful poem that leaves the reader with an enigma to ponder. Thanks for sharing Pankaj.

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