Deceiving Poem by Chealsey Marou

Deceiving

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I met a man

A man on his own

There's a thousand of Riyals in his pocket

And yet he's unhappy and feels vulnerable

I asked him what is wrong?

And he replied to me

Clever girl, you might have no money

But your soul is pure and untouchable

I smirked at him and gave him a devilish look

No you are wrong because there's a black parasite inside my soul…




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Deceiving
Wednesday, August 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: deceit,insight,soul
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Mysterious Soul`
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 18 May 2020

Clever girl, you might have no money But your soul is pure and untouchable I smirked at him and gave him a devilish look No you are wrong because there's a black parasite inside my soul… character and self realization. well penned poem. tony

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Kevin Patrick 17 April 2019

We all have a wardrobe of demons, but we also have pockets of goodness. A good poem, thank you for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Chealsey. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Chealsey Marou 16 August 2017

Some of my work is not based on imagination. I wrote it based on my vision. Thanks for spending your time to read my piece^^ and its my pleasure to read your work...ty for sharing^^

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Chealsey Marou

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Olongapo City, Philippines
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