Deceiving Eyes Poem by EmmaLeigh Smith

Deceiving Eyes

Rating: 5.0


It's in those eyes I crumble.
They break me down, and make me weak.
You're searching for something with your gaze,
and I am overcome with a sudden, consuming fear.
There is nothing inside of me for you.
There is no warmth, no desire.
I can't feel anything for you.
I haven't the ability to reach out to you.
You don't want any part of my train wrecked soul.
My mind is in a heap of rubble in the wake
of a storm that never stops raging.
I am locked inside of myself.
I am beyond repair.
If I could get out, and run away I would.
I would run, and never turn back.
I suggest you do as I would.
Before I destroy you too.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 29 May 2009

i like the flow of this poem..but the ending, is it provoking? ..grace

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 May 2009

A unique expression of love, dont love, broken-heart........One of the best I ever read..........10++++++

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