Declaring our love,

we wrote our

names in the sand.

In the sunset

of a palm tree shaded

grove we lay

down

and talked about

a future of

great,

everlasting,

pure,

love.

You

have been gone

for years now.

The love has cooled

to sub zero

temperatures,

and I’m back to

settling for

writing

my own name

in the snow.

Carsten Thomsen

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Dee Daffodil (8/6/2006 10:58:00 AM)
Me thinks you need another sandy beach perhaps....I like the style of your poem...it's quite interesting!
Hugs,
Dee

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