Deep Desire Poem by Sandra Feldman

Deep Desire

Rating: 5.0


Desire, dreams
And fire,
Make up so much
Of Life.

Feeling,
At its fullest
Has always
Seemed so right.

As Love fulfills
Its promise,
Dreamt so long ago
In some silent
Lonely, night.

Tuesday, September 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: illusion,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 30 September 2020

Yes in order to make life fruitful one should make aly desire, dreams and fire nothing can be better that it. A profound poem. Nicely thought and written.10*******

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 September 2020

A well penned poem. Truly exceptional and remarkable...5 stars*****

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Deluke Muwanigwa 29 September 2020

Good one. Let the desire scream in the silence of the night coz everything is alright in the quiet night holding you tight you take flight silently violently and as quietly in the silence because mum and dad are home. Lol. Just freestyling on the concept

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 September 2020

Desire carries fire with dreams of burning the light to achieve it in reality. Desire is very amazing. But love fulfills the promise and dream carries love to glow. An amazing poem is nicely penned! ...5 stars! ~!

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