Sandra Feldman


21st Century - Poem by Sandra Feldman

We speak to Robots on the phone,
And our Computers are our home,
We really think we're not alone,
But all of this lacks Human tone,
As our poor lives turn into stone.


Comments about 21st Century by Sandra Feldman

  • Gold Star - 10,087 Points Daniel Brick (5/5/2015 3:31:00 PM)

    In 5 lines you have spoken volumes about the world we have created. A world shared with increasingly intrusive machines, so much so there are scientists working in Artificial Intelligence who think we are so close - it's time to draw up a statements of the Rights of Thinking Machines! First
    Right - the absolute right of a thinking entity to be left alone and undisturbed if (It) desires solitude. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,310 Points Lubinda Lubinda (12/19/2014 3:36:00 PM)

    Wow, awesome poem, i like the way you bring out the point that our lives revolve around technology nowadays! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,376 Points Kevin Patrick (11/4/2014 4:21:00 PM)

    You have beautifully and succinctly captured what its like to be living in the 21 century, It amazes me when I see people, and they just play on their smart phones talking to people at a distance while human beings stand right in front of them, I do it to, but not to the extreme of every minute living within the virtual world. Great work Sandra, its definitely a poem that makes you think. I like those (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 379 Points Tyrone Gayle (9/18/2014 7:08:00 PM)

    Bravo! I extremely enjoy this piece. Personally, the poem is a reflection of my daily love and hate relationship with technology. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Elias Uddin (7/2/2014 5:18:00 AM)

    We speak to Robots on the phone,
    And our Computers are our home,
    We really think we're not alone,
    But all of this lacks Human tone,
    As our poor lives turn into stone.

    Muy bien! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jt Maktub (6/7/2014 9:09:00 PM)

    Gosh! So true. I totally agree (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 128 Points Teddy Opundo (6/7/2014 5:51:00 AM)

    sensible....great piece of writing... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mazhari David (6/7/2014 5:17:00 AM)

    You've summed it all well up, Sandra.* * (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,463 Points Eugene Levich (4/6/2014 7:36:00 PM)

    I love this one! Brava! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 369 Points Shania K. Younce (3/16/2014 5:53:00 PM)

    Wow, this is really good. I quite agree with this poem. Bien! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Fiona Schwartzinoff (1/29/2014 9:05:00 PM)

    So I'm not alone! Thank you for this! I will share with my cousin Aradhika... :) She will definitely enjoy it as she is totally anti-technology! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,573 Points Khairul Ahsan (11/24/2013 2:42:00 AM)

    Just five lines, so perfectly describe our present state of technology dependent life! 10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,553 Points Valerie Dohren (11/20/2013 12:55:00 PM)

    Too right Sandra, computers seem to have replaced humans in many instances, and those awful recorded telephone answering systems really annoy me. Well expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,112 Points Gajanan Mishra (11/18/2013 7:31:00 PM)

    poor life turn in to stone, good write, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 19, 2013


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