Deep In Penetration Poem by David Lacey

Deep In Penetration



Outside the sky melts fast in felt fabric strips
Dripping only to have colour caught in the cauldron
Inside the sky melts slow, deep in penetration
Lilac clouds drift on easy with the breeze
The wind it whispers secrets unheard
Think it over, the holy word.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 01 September 2007

A very good use of the repetition of consonants. A good contrast.

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David Lacey

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