Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 288 Points (20-05-1963 / India)

Defeated - Poem by Palas Kumar Ray

Oh Plant, I am defeated,
Defeated to you,
Me Human.

When I look at you,
I find myself
so small! so mean! so selfish!

Your life and that of mine
When I compare, I see
The contrast of Good and Evil.

You are the God, I believe
And I ask myself
Am I not the Devil?

Oh Plant, I am defeated,
Defeated to you
Me Human.

You give us breath to live
And food to eat and grow.
Give us rain, relief from pain
in our sufferings and woe.

Oh Plant, I am defeated
Defeated to you
Me Human.

Glaring at me
I feel shame to thee
I've nothing to give.

I'm a thief, I am a Demon
I put off your life
I live on your flesh.
Yet I cut off your throat
build castles with your bones.

Oh Plant, I am defeated
Defeated to you
Me Human.

My civilization of motion
My search into the space.
Also fueled by you
Your ancestors' remains.

So I hide my pride
Oh Plant, on shame
I'm defeated to thee.

I beg for your mercy
I am Worthless Human.

© Palas Kumar Ray.All rights reserved. 

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Comments about Defeated by Palas Kumar Ray

  • Bronze Star - 2,796 Points Denis Martindale (2/27/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    based on this poetry by Palas Kumar Ray. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Shimon Weinroth (10/29/2008 1:52:00 AM)

    the bilogical cycle of our plant cousins is admirably presented, it is 'the way of all flesh' sensitive and understanding,10
    I don't think you can say defeated to rather defeated by,
    cheers Shimon (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,412 Points Indira Renganathan (10/27/2008 4:08:00 AM)

    written eco-friendly...very touching...very good poem indeed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (9/27/2008 7:35:00 AM)

    nature where love interconnected.
    your hearty poetic description touched me.
    so++++++++10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (7/3/2008 5:53:00 AM)

    your poem is a wake up call to all those who abuse Mother Nature
    wonderful write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 274 Points Kesav Easwaran (7/2/2008 7:02:00 AM)

    trees and plants have prime importance in our environment...a good poem upholding the necessary existence of plant life (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (7/1/2008 7:33:00 AM)

    Your humility proves to this reader that you have great worth as a human being.
    Excellent write.

    Warmest regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bianca J. Walker (6/23/2008 1:47:00 PM)

    I like this, a look at life from a very different and often ignored perspective. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 627 Points Subbaraman N V (6/23/2008 2:32:00 AM)

    Excellent concern for the Nature's manifestation! A great write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Inbar A (6/22/2008 1:21:00 AM)

    Your idea is well-phrased here, and is really nice to read. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 21, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, June 6, 2014

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