Defiant Malcontents Poem by Dorothy Kardas, Psy.D. Th.D.

Defiant Malcontents



Wingless beings...
Spiritual shrinkers?
Unwitting quitters?
Unrefined thinkers?
Vain boasters
Boasting of 'truth' they lack
Despisers of His Truth...
In a prison ship
Deeming 'godless' to be hip.

Unsophisticated minds
What can you gather
But hopeless, nihilistic finds?
Naive optimists
What can you meet
Without His Right Arm
But pointless... superfluous harm?

Hearts bleak
Lukewarm, frozen
To Love vast and deep...
Battling divine reference
With unsightly glove...
Still, hovering over you
All-knowing, blazing Dove...

When secular impulse fails
His Truth burns with might
Lightening all murky trails
Dismal shadows and night.
Winds capricious, craze changeful
Cannot seize enduring power...
The fickle and shifting
At the end, can only devour...

His saving Truth
Changeless, enriching
And consoling Force...
Still, over you... radiating Dove
Thirsting for overdue remorse...

Moral Teacher of society
Starving for morsel of bread...
Thirsty for hardy sobriety...
Hungry to feed... made one fed...
Still, hovering over you...
The days just add...

Without His Truth redeeming
Goodness liberating
Love illuminating...
What's left?
But a victim of theft...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 27 May 2009

The bowl, of my head, rings hollow, to fill in such words...iip

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Reggis Fenagalo 27 May 2009

'Thirsty for hardy sobriety... hungry to feed... made one fed...' spiritually illuminating and nutritious! Your work is forceful, logical, and persuasive proceeding directly from the uplifting teaching of Christ or as you referred to Him as the Moral Teacher. Excellent piece of art! Thanks!

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Renia Surrette 10 June 2009

Dear Dr. Kardas, Indeed, our origin and destiny is God! We are children of God under the life-giving action of the Holy Spirit... 'the blazing Dove'. Thank you for another masterpiece! Your poetic genius always evolves! God bless... Renia & family.10+++++

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Tom Beckhart 10 June 2009

A challenging message and illuminating material to read and ponder about. Superb ending, title, timeless insights and style of expression! 10!

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Max Steiner 28 May 2009

Without God's Truth and order... 'what's left? but a victim of theft...' - simply brilliant! We become spiritually and intellectually sound when individually and collectively we conform to the reality of the divine truth and divine order. God's Truth keeps safe and protects the dignity of us all. Another superbly written poem! Doc you have a sturdy pen! 10! Max

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Paul Richardson Sr. 28 May 2009

Loved the surprisal and phraseological innovations, particularly in the last stanzas. Wisdom indeed begins with self-knowledge and our eager subordination to divine truth, which is supremely comforting, remedial and beneficial. Thank you for this great work! God bless...

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Albert Longsworth III 28 May 2009

Dr. Kardas, You are a rare and successful didact! Enjoyed the depth of the insight and the structure of the poem. It is amazing how in the confines of a poem you explain the various voices of our age and heedless, reckless human attitudes, evaluating them in the light of changeless - divine Truth... admonishing yet offering hope, and by a few wisely chosen ideas you promote divine Truth by means of great fascination with its liberating, healing, illuminating and consoling power. This is poetic and intellectual genius! 10! Thank you!

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