Delusion Poem by Sandra Feldman

Delusion

Rating: 5.0


I have no way
Of reaching you,
To tell you
How I feel,
Maybe, because
You never were,
But an illusion,
A desired dream
Not real,
Of those that come
In love's
Sweet name
When nothing
Else
Is near...

Thursday, July 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: disappointment,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 04 July 2019

This poem spoke to me as I suspect it speaks to many women. The words are painful daggers but they should be learned before girls start dating. Extremely well written.10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Kostas Lagos 05 July 2019

Brief meaningful lines! Love it

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 July 2019

A lovely sweet poem, dear Ma'am Sandra.....10+++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 July 2019

(....) O' dream is full night east to west north to south through the rainbow colors, but in awakening find me with dark owl o how illusion the love is........ (JUST TRYING)

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 July 2019

All are valid here there are too I'm here within me and you're there, maybe within you crowded and crowded but mine in deserted butterflies are flying but never come to me flowers are blooming but never come to me sun is rising daily but never shines my inside moon is becoming full on its phase but never lit up my inner heart I don't know how do you spend the moment of lonely crowded (........)

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 04 July 2019

Let true love shine high and bright. Let it never be an illusion to innocent hearts. Quite inspiring and insightful. Thanks for sharing the very well crafted sensational poem.X

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