Departing In The Night Poem by scarlett ghost

Departing In The Night

Rating: 5.0


This is for you as you get in your car.
As you drive to the North and you follow that star.
I wished for the tide to come carry me away,
but it left me there standing, both feet in the clay.

I listened intently, I followed your stare.
You'd caught me off-guard and I'd started to care.
I begged you to love me, to stop and to stay,
you said, 'Babe I did love you, but we've lost our way! '.

So here I now stand, and it looks like you're right,
you are a dark prince and you did steal my light.
The funny thing is we are two of a kind.
Though you couldn't see that with your superior mind.

So you sail to the North and I'll take the East,
together we'll wine and we'll dine and we'll feast.
When I meet my maker on judgement day,
then I'll see you in hell when you can't walk away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
George F. Hunter 17 August 2009

Nice rhyming poem. Clever ending.

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Nia Riz 17 August 2009

wow...this poem was really really good to read....i really loved it! ! ! .....i think this poem dugged itself into my mind mostly because it rhymes in every line and it doesnt have that lazy drag......it ws just great..keep writing... luv, NiA

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