Desolate Feeling Poem by Sandra Feldman

Desolate Feeling

Rating: 5.0


Your presence
Was so important,
So vital, to me
Where did you go?
Fulfilling,
My greatest fear,
Like untouched mist
You disappeared,
Leaving me alone
In this immense,
Regretful,
Valley of tears.

Monday, February 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,saddened
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 26 February 2019

And this will pass too...A poem of pain, so well written

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Mahtab Bangalee 25 February 2019

your presence was for a while, for a little time being; but this littleness stained my heart immensely o' dear, look that littleness now- an epic, an epoch; centuries waves..............

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 February 2019

You are not the lonely moon...that is everyone's companion... the source of attraction!

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