Parwin Jadan

Rookie (2,11 sunday,1990 / happy pampero)

Destiny - Poem by Parwin Jadan

Summer is short
Winter is long
Autumn is close
Spring is a dream
And the swing is walking
She was like moon
On the water face
You were a grey shadow
And I dropped inside
That dark deeps


Comments about Destiny by Parwin Jadan

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (7/12/2009 9:59:00 PM)

    a meaningful theme /finely penned (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (1/22/2009 6:37:00 PM)

    This is indeed, very symbolic. I liked it though. Normally I don't like it. But this
    was simple and direct. No guile was involved.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (1/1/2009 10:12:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem indeed....Symbolic but meaningful....Good work...Keep on writing.....10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 31, 2008



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