Dog goD 8Hate

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Destiny's Sin


Pontificate stealthy and ''wise? ''
the words glossed with sweet style.
Stand in the light of a dark-world's
candle, alight at both ends.

Smile at they complicit as they confer
a dark-world's praise and know -
and ''you know! ''- something's wrong.
''So what'' you say, and I say too. Yet,

religiose proclamations are not all vagary -
something strong incites their frame.
The Irony: you are warned - do not do
what the sacred forbids, yet, no one can!

Alas, suffer subsequent realities
for what deities do,
not we - victoms of circumstance:
Destiny's egregious sin.

Submitted: Saturday, October 06, 2007
Edited: Wednesday, April 13, 2011
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  • Rookie Kyon Shade (9/15/2008 10:54:00 PM)

    I must say today i became a fan. Your poems are heart felt and deep and takes it's readers on a journey that spans many levels. I rated this piece of art a 10, any rating below that would be a disgrace to your expert ability to trandscend the limitations of written expression. (Report) Reply

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